Why+I+Revise

I’m not one for revising although it’s normally me who needs it the most. I usually have a lot of punctuation and grammatical errors. I didn’t actually have a lot of them in MPD Chapter 2, but I did fix the few that I had. I also changed the beginning of the letter that was addressed to Detective Davis. I found that the original beginning was very choppy and seamed to lack some sort of flow. I defiantly liked the revised beginning of the letter more then the original. I also found that I didn’t like the way the events in the end of the chapter played out, so I went back and pretty much rewrote the entire ending. I’m not really sure if I liked it the second time I wrote it. I felt that there was something missing, but I just can’t put my finger on it. Don’t get me wrong I like this ending a lot more the previous one, but I think I might have to rewrite my rewrite. All in all I think that my significant rewrite considerably improved upon my original concepts for MPD Chapter 2.

Phil: I JUST came upon this and you definitely understand the importance of revising. Keep it up! You have an original style that can only get better when you revise! (P.S. "seamed" should be "seemed!")