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 //The train barrels down the track with steam blowing from the top. Zoom in on a window on the side of the train. Ken is in that car sleeping Laurence is there as well, but he’s not asleep. Instead he looks out the window watching the rising sun.//
 * ACT II**
 * SCENE I**


 * ACT II**
 * SCENE II**

//Laurence and Ken have made it out of town safely and now they are just trying to survive. They blew through the money they had in a few days. Now they are living in a warehouse there are no other inhabitants here it is only Laurence and Ken. The warehouse is dark and grimy. There are a few window panes that still reveal some sunlight, but the rest are boarded up and no sunlight is seen through them. They are sitting in front of one of the broken window panes trying to get as much sunlight as they can before the sun sinks below the skyline.//

So now what it’s been three day’s? I’m tired of living off of rats. We flew through that money.
 * Laurence**

I know, man, I know, but it’s hard. Were too young to get jobs, and even if we could manage to get jobs they’d check our background and see what happened. We’d be caught in a second.
 * Ken**

Then what should we do. I can’t stand having to sleep on the floor and making sure I don’t roll in rat shit.
 * Laurence**

I’m thinking. It’s complicated, and you know that. So you can either help me figure something out or you can keep complaining.
 * Ken**

[Silence]

We could go back to town and get more money from our parents.
 * Laurence**

You got to be kidding. You’re not serious. Are you?
 * Ken**

Well yeah, I mean … I guess it was a bad idea.
 * Laurence**

Yeah it was really bad.
 * Ken**

Well I’d like to hear you come up with something better.
 * Laurence**

I got one idea, but it’s going to take commitment, and courage. A lot of courage.
 * Ken**

[Laurence’s stomach growls]

I’m listening.
 * Laurence**

We could rob someone
 * Ken**

Are you crazy. We could get arrested.
 * Laurence**

We’ve already killed two people. This is a minor offense in comparison.
 * Ken**

I guess you’re right
 * Laurence**


 * ACT II**
 * SCENE III**

//It’s dark out, around 8:00 at night. Laurence and Ken hide in an ally way and wait for someone to come buy that looks like they have money. Ken holds his Swiss Army knife to intimidate the man or women there about to rob. Laurence has a large 2x4 that Ken had found in the warehouse.//

Be careful there Laurence. You don’t want to get blood on your hands, again (Laughs). Don’t want to hurt anyone, like you did Tommy, or do you. It did make you feel big, didn’t it? It made you feel happy, strong, you felt like your father. Intensity surged through you uncontrollably.
 * Narrator**

Maybe this isn’t such a great idea.
 * Laurence**

Do you want to eat?
 * Ken**

Yeah.
 * Laurence** (stomach growls)

Then I suggest you man up.
 * Ken**

//Laurence walks away from Ken trying to find a place to gather himself. Then Ken yells and he comes back.//

Look at this guy coming up. He looks like he’s got some money, and look at him he’s probably only 120 pounds max. We can take this yuppie out with one hit.
 * Ken**

Were not trying to hurt him, Ken. Just getting the money and running.
 * Laurence**

(Ken says nothing in response)

Get ready. Get Ready… GO!
 * Ken**

//Laurence grabs the small man by his argyle sweater and throws him into the ally dirtying his tan kakis. Laurence slams him into the ally wall and holds him there. Ken picks up the 2x4 That Laurence had been holding and hits the man in the knee and the man falls to the ground screaming. Then Ken throws the 2x4 down the ally.//

What are you doing I thought I told you we weren’t going to hurt him.
 * Laurence**

SHUT UP. We got to move fast if we want to get the money.
 * Ken**

Take what you want. My wallets in my back pocket just leave me alone.
 * Man** (Mumbling)

Shut up you yuppie piece of shit, or I’ll gut you like a fish
 * Ken**

Yo Ken, Just chill out.
 * Laurence**

Shut up. Both of you. I’m. Tired. Of. This.
 * Ken**

//Ken takes his knife and stabs the man in the Stomach twisting the knife as he pulls it out. In a moment of insanity Ken Stabs again, and again. Then he slices the mans stomach wide open. Laurence is terrified and runs off down the ally after the second stab.// //While Ken is in the process of removing the dead mans Wallet Laurence comes back with the 2x4. Ken does not see him.//

Sorry.
 * Laurence** (Whispers)

//Then Laurence brings the 2x4 smashing down on his head splitting the 2x4 and his head. Immediately blood gushes out of the open wound. Laurence still holds the broken half of the 2x4 in his hand and stares at the dead body of Ken, and then at the mans.//

What did you do? Another one dead. Do you have any self control? No you don’t. Just look at Ken he’s dead. And look at that man. You could have stopped this from happening, you no that right. You could have only had one dead body, and now you have two. There’s so much blood Laurence. So much. Doesn’t it drive you mad. Don’t you remember that day you left you family back in Hick country. There was so much blood that night. First your mom. Covered in her blood and then Tommy, and now Ken. Everywhere you go there’s blood.
 * Narrator**

//Laurence still holding the 2x4 hits Ken’s dead body repeatedly screaming.//

Why couldn’t you just stop? Then we could have stayed together and I wouldn’t have killed you.
 * Laurence**

//The scene ends with Laurence lunging at the dead yuppies body and beginning to rip internal organs out and eating them.//


 * ACT II**
 * SCENE IV**

//A few years have passed since the last time Laurence was seen. Laurence is running down the street sirens are not far behind. Red and blue lights cut through the dark night like a knife through butter. Laurence is panting and he turns down and ally. He leans up against a wall and we can see blood covering his mouth and hands. He quickly catches his breath and lays flat on the wall. The cop car stops a little ways ahead of the ally and gets out of the car with a flashlight in hand.//

In pursuit of suspect, Caucasian male, on foot. Heading down alleyway between (Pause while he looks for street signs) 20th and 19th on locust.
 * Police Officer** (Talking into the walkie talkie attached to his shoulder)

//Laurence hears the Officer taking and sticks his head out of the ally a little. He waits against the wall. The officer with his flash light turns down the ally. At the exact moment he turns Laurence stabs the Officer in the heart with the Swiss Army knife that had previously belonged to Ken.//

Thanks for looking out for me buddy.
 * Laurence** (looking up into the sky)

Looks like you got more blood on your hands. What is this the 50th person since Ken died. All you do is kill, rip, eat and repeat. You’re mindless now. Half of the people you kill you don’t even eat, nor rob. Now you just do it for the thrill. You’ll never be able to control you’re killings. You’re just going to get more and more aggressive. There’s only one person left that can stop you from going mad.
 * Narrator**

//Laurence gets into the police car and drives away.//


 * ACT II**
 * SCENE V**

//Laurence is driving out of town when he sees a store. The sign says **FIREARMS, AMMUNITUION, AND ALL YOUR HUNTING NEEDS.** Laurence pulls into the parking lot enters the store and then exits after a minute if loud sounds with a large duffle bag filled to the brim with weapons. Blood is encircled around his mouth he wipes it away and gets into the car.//

That’s a boy Laurence. Get what you need and get hunting.
 * Narrator**


 * ACT III**
 * SCENE I**