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I wrote this in eighth grade. Pretty much a copy off of SAW but the new one is going to be completely different. It will take some of the characters and events, but completely change the outcome and the plot of the story

Dave Nicolas was a cop in New York who was recently promoted to detective, a job he has always wanted since he was a kid. Dave was sitting a work waiting for his first case little did he know that this would be the hardest case he ever had. The phone rang on Dave’s desk. Dave quickly answered the phone. A raspy voice came over the phone it was the commissioner he said “Dave you got a case meet me in the conference room so I can fill you in on the details.” Dave replied saying “I’ll be there as fast as I can.” Dave grabbed his things and left for the conference room.
 * __The Replacement__**

Dave entered the conference room commissioner Jameson filled Dave in on the case. There was a murder in the Four Seasons Hotel. There were two victims a husband and a wife they were both stabbed to death. There was no evidence as to who did the crime. So Dave decided to go check out the crime scene to see what had happened.

When he walked in the room he saw the husband face down on the bed and the wife was dead in the bathroom. Both victims looked like they had been tortured before they were killed. Them Dave went back to the office to look through the little evidence he had.

Dave went on the computer to check his email and found one massage from someone he didn’t know. He hesitantly opened the e-mail a video popped up and a man wearing a clown mask said “Detective David Nicolas how did you like the mess I left behind for you at the Four Seasons. I hope you enjoyed it because there will be more coming.” Then the video disappeared and Dave hastily tried to track down the source of the video. He found it he ran to his car and sped off to the address of the e-mail. He was disappointed to find an abandoned house there. So he drove home to get some rest from the long day.

The next day Dave got up and went to work. On his way to his office Commissioner Jameson stopped him and said there was another murder this time in a meat packing plant this time there were four victims. All of them were employees of the plant. These victims weren’t stabbed but tortured and slaughtered. Dave saw many of his co workers vomiting from the sight of the mangled bodies. Dave checked for evidence but found very little so he decided to go back to work. When he got to his office there was and e-mail from the same person as the previous day. He opened the e-mail and a video with the same man dressed as a clown popped up. He said “How did you like the look of the employees at the meatpacking plant. I like to call it the meatpacking massacre.” He then said “Wait till tomorrow then will have some real fun.” Dave traced the e-mail to the same location as the day before. So Dave was upset and decided he would go home sleep.

When Dave woke up his head hurt and it was dark. So he started to move when he realized he wasn’t in his bed. He was on a tiled floor and he was chained to a pole. His eyes were starting to adjust to the darkness when the lights went on. He squinted in pain from the transition to light from dark. He started looking around he looked like he was in a dilapidated locker room.

Then a TV in the far right corner of the room went on and a man dressed like a clown pooped up. He said “Didn’t I tell you we were going to have fun today.” The TV darkened and the chains on his legs released him. He slowly got up and walked around instinctively he ran to the door but it was locked. He then started to look around. Then he heard the water in the showers go on so he slowly walked over to look in. he couldn’t see anything because of the steam and then he out of nowhere two hands pushed him into the shower. Dave shrieked in pain from the blistering water. He quickly got to his knees and crawled out of the shower area. He sat on the floor and leaned on one of the benches in front of the lockers. Then an eerie creaking sound came from behind him and he saw one of the lockers opening and a little man jumped out, it was the man from the e-mails. He said “Hello Detective I’ve been planning on catching you for a long time ever since that day you took my job.” He took off his mask to reveal his true identity. It was one of his good friends Ryan who applied for the job of detective at the same time he did but he never got the job. Then Ryan grabbed a gun and shot Dave in both legs then tortured him until he eventually died.

The next day the police station was in a panic because for the second day in a row the new Detective, Dave, was missing. They called him many times and went to his apartment but there was nothing there. It was like he vanished but luckily they had a replacement picked out a man named Ryan Johnson.