Why+I+Rewrite

I’m not one for revising although it’s normally me who needs it the most. I usually have a lot of punctuation and grammatical errors. I didn’t actually have a lot of them in MPD Chapter 2, but I did fix the few that I had. I also found that I didn’t like the way the events in the end of the chapter played out, so I went back and pretty much rewrote the entire ending. I’m not really sure if I liked it the second time I wrote it. I felt that there was something missing, but I just can’t put my finger on it. Don’t get me wrong I like this ending a lot more the previous one, but I think I might have to rewrite my rewrite. All in all I think that my significant rewrite significantly improved upon my original MPD Chapter 2.